My Poem Got Published On Visual Verse

In these days, these freelance days, these days when I’m reading other people’s works and poems and blog posts, these days when I’m writing and submitting properly, measuring where I should and shouldn’t, I got my first poem published. Yay!

Here’s the link : visualverse.org/submissions/delineation/

I’d be super happy to know what you think about the poem. And feedback, unsolicited suggestions are more than welcome. They are NEEDED. Thanks!

All Blog Posts’ P.S: English is my second language, and I do not write well in my first (Hindi). While reading my blogposts, if you find a sentence or paragraph that can be written in a better way, or find any grammatical mistakes, please feel free to suggest them in the comments. I’d really appreciate it. And you are awesome!